Spliting in two, I dream of you. My heart beat quickens My pulse leaves me stricken. I cant see your face, lost in this pace. Cant hold you now, I dont know how. Look into my eyes, Look past the lies. whisper in my ear, so i know that you are there. Let me know you care, To see the love you bare. Bring my soul alive, The light within me strives. |
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Im just writing right now. These are my feelings expressed as they flow out of my head.
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beautiful is the way you love me
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"i put a pebble in my shoe, and watch me walk... I can walk, i can walk"
I dream of you. <-- these are two really great lines
I like this poem a lot it's short yet powerful my only critcism is the rhyem scheme gets a little messed up between lines 11-14 since you use the same ryhem twice although it soudns fine like that, other then that very well written
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In an Effort to be a Poet
I hear all the greatest poets were alcoholics,
so I've taken up drinking.
I've also taken up suicial thoughts,
and bouts of insanity.
Sadly nothing seems to be working,
but at least I've got a pretty good buzz going.
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"i put a pebble in my shoe, and watch me walk... I can walk, i can walk"
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